Poorly written, a truly dull read. I gave up a little over half way through

This book is also published under another title. Kind of a scam

The story was very good and I think that the narrative lines by the star Ashley were too detailed so I skip some of them and mostly read the quotes.

Very bland and dry. I thought this book would be better the characters were one dimensional with no personality. Jake was just using her to get his cut of the money he didn't deserve. Jake didn't care about her enough to contact her, only when money was involved. Jake just didn't care about her at all!!

I don't think this book was extraordinary. I downloaded it thinking it was going to be a nice book not a sample of your other ones!

I've been reading eroticas for a few years now and this is the worse erotica/romance novel I've encountered yet. There is no sense of direction with the theme of this book. The characters are dull and repetitive. And the detailing was overdone when it came to describing the settings. I also found the fact that the author overused the words "amazing" and "despicable". Those are now the two words in the English vocabulary I deplore the most because of Ms. Rose. I'm not sure what ran through the her head as she was writing this, but more so what the editor and publisher were on for even allowing this book to become an actual end-product. If this long paragraph didn't explain thoroughly my pure dissatisfaction, then read this book and kill off the remainder of your brain cells by purchasing the "continuation" of it.

I enjoyed the story up until the point it was the end. It didn't feel like you finished writing, I realize you are the Author, but most books finish the storyline in one book. You wouldn't have to say whether they got back together, but at least finish their trip together and book 2 or "part 2" could be where you intwine the life of their friends more and let us know if they get back together.

A really good read with a cliffhanger ending. I can see how some readers would be irked, but I really enjoyed the story and will be picking up a copy of book two. After all, I have to find out what happens next!

Don't waste your time! Unless you wish to purchase vol 2-3 you are left with a predictable teaser with no believable story line and no conclusion.

Love it! Never read a story with this kind of plot before. Buying part 2 now!