The flow of the book isn’t great. It also needs to be proofread better.

Wasn’t really impressed. This book was as predictable and scripted as a hallmark movie. The dialogue had no natural flow.

By Bethany Lopez Cute story a lot high schoolish so much drama and not enough emotion! iBooks

I wasn't overly impressed with this book. There were a number of punctuation and grammatical errors and I felt the writing was kind of flat. There was entirely too much omniscience for my taste and I feel it would've been stronger if I were clued into only Briana or Colin and Briana's thoughts and feelings. The other major flaw for me were the plot holes. The whole premise is that Colin broke Briana's heart and there wasn't going to be a second chance, yet there was very little chase before she gave in and I didn't feel like he really prove anything to her or me, the reader, that he'd changed or deserved a second chance (outside of pure attraction and unresolved feelings). Oh, I can't forget Shawn, who was thrown in there without rhyme or reason. Read this if you want, but don't expect it to be life changing or anything.

Not an interesting book. Very boring and predictable. No drama, no plot.

Nice story.