I thought O’Malley was the chief but in this book it seems like Connelly is? Was really shocked about the Ramirez and Avery storyline.

OMG! First 2 books were good but some things, not realistic at all!!!!! Being from Boston myself and a police family. Doesn’t matter where you’re from. No one becomes a Detective in 3 years!! Please, you’re still considered a Rookie! The grammar and spelling errors are incredible!! Doesn’t anyone proof read his work?? Never mind that but putting characters in the wrong place as a Captain in one book and switched with the homicide supervisor in the next. Doesn’t he check his notes? They’re main characters though!! Crazy

Becoming boring and need a good proof reader.

I enjoyed the concept of this series. Avery Black was portrayed as an awesome cop. But in many ways, she acted very unrealistically. Taking things upon her self that rookie much less seasoned cops would. It did bother me as women. But what really bothered was the grammatical errors found within the series. Some books more than others. Not comprehensible in this technological age. But I will probably read more by this author.